第一段:共3句；第1句全体描绘；2.3句细节描绘

? 第1句：

一般最初：emerging from the chart is such data:

高档且稀有最初：were it not for the chart/drawing above , a thought-provoking phenomenon/perceptually invisible relation /these statistics would be neglected/omitted:（留心这儿+n./v-ing,可所以图表标题的改写）

? 第2.3句：

（1）表格

the percentage of folks?人3 has peaked among a , at approximately 40%.

meanwhile, the proportions of b are equal between?人1 and?人3 , at roughly 50%. in contrast, c is 64% or so , among those?人2， the maximum value among all these categories. （55 words）

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（2）三年以上时刻点

from?初步年 to?结束年 , the number of?主题词1 augmented remarkably from only about?开始值 to?结束值. meanwhile, the amount of?主题词 2， exceeding individuals ’ expectation，ascended dramatically from?开始值 to?结束值during the same period. （34 words）

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（3）两年时刻点

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in 初步年，?有对应年最大值的名词，topped the three?主题词， while in?比照年， a remarkable decline occurred in it by?差值 from?初步年数值 to?结束年数值 . by contrast, there was a noticeable jump of?差值 from 初步年数值 to?结束年数值 during the same period in a, and c stayed at the same level of?对应数值.? (55words)

（4）无时刻点

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the percentage of a（max） is highest amongst all the 品种总数 （four/five）categories, at approximately 对应百分数 , whereas the data for b c d as well as others accounts for about 数2 ， 数3and 数5 respectively.（45 words）

第二段：说明缘由，共四句话。（缘由是万能的；可以套各种标题）

? the fundamental factors that contribute to the aforementioned tendency may be summarized as below. initially, with the rapid development of economy and society, many individuals, if not most/an army of folks, especially/embracing college students, are becoming increasingly rich（可以根据标题变成其他adj.比方说低沉的词语：selfish）, which presents the consequences of the situation above. in addition, the tendency has a tremendous relationship with the turning of folks ’ outlook and perspectives on________ , that is to say, the fact that _______________ is no longer as essentia

l as it used to be demonstrates what really counts is ____________ . last but not least, the changes are enhanced and promoted by the superior policy of（图表传递的是好表象）/the changes are attributed to the government in the ______ field. the government, for instance, calls for the move that under no circumstances should we contend _______ is insignificant, bringing about the harmony of commercial returns and social contribution.（152 words）

第三段：归纳总结。

情况一：当图表展示的是好的方面：下结论+展望将来

?taking into account what has been argued, we can come to the conclusion that this established trend is positive and therefore acceptable. accordingly, let ’s get prepared to embrace this irreversible tendency.（33 words）

情况二：当图表展示的是不好的方面——提主张+展望将来

? as has been mentioned above, countermeasures should be taken immediately so as to reverse the grim situation. first of all, relevant regulations should be established to severely punish those who violate ___ rules deliberately, be they ___ or ___. furthermore， a widespread education campaign is bound to be launched to inform citizens that proper rules are of benefit to ____.only by doing so can we exist in a harmonious and disciplined society.

情况三：图表展示的东西是一把双刃剑——下结论（有弊有利）+展望将来

? in conclusion , , (主题词) would be a double-edged sword if it was used carelessly or without restrictions.supposing that folks arm themselves with intelligence, and discretion, they are bound to bypass the potential drawbacks of ___ as well as take advantage of all the merits.（57 words）